Special: Overkill VS Jack E Breaker

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That's like saying we're not going to not make confusing post titles!

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Overkill slowly gets to his feet, he looks at Jack who stands panting, out of breath, Overkill drags his heavy body up and stands looking at Jack E Breaker, Jack darts forwards looking for a boot to the head of Overkill but as big as Overkill is, he’s pretty agile and he back flips out of harms way onto the very edge of the building. He quickly regains his balance as Jack strides forward and connects with a big punch to Overkill’s ribs, Overkill manages to smack Jack in the side of the face as he is hit himself. Jack then pushes Overkill backwards and once more another back flip from Overkill, using Jack’s push, sends Overkill into the air several feet away from the building, he hovers there for a second and watches as Jack shakes his head and simply dissipates into the air.

Overkill scans the area looking for Jack but he can’t see anything, SUDDENLY OVERKILL FEELS SOMETHING HIT HIM IN THE GUT, SOMETHING THAT TAKES HIM FLYING BACKWARDS, BUT OVERKILL CAN’T SHAKE IT OFF. OVERKILL IS BEING DRIVEN ACROSS THE SKY BY SOMETHING UNSEEN, HE KNOWS IT’S JACK E BREAKER BUT HE IS BEING DRIVEN WITH SUCH FORCE THAT HE CAN’T DO ANYTHING! JACK SMASHES OVERKILL DOWN INTO A HUGE METAL CONTAINER AND THEN JACK REAPPEARS STOOD OVER OVERKILL!

Jack leaps several feet into the air onto the top of another large container, he scans the area to see he’s in a dock yard, he spots a massive crane and looks at it. With his mind, Jack simply extends his hand and the crane moves around with one of those giant steel loading containers on the other end of the cable. Jack moves it over where Overkill is and looks up at the cable, the cable beings to slowly rip and unlink itself, Jack looks down to where Overkill was, BUT OVERKILL IS GONE!! JACK LOOKS AROUND BUT SUDDENLY FROM BEHIND HE IS KICKED IN THE BACK SENDING HIM FLYING DOWN TO THE GROUND ONTO THE CONCRETE!!

<font size=5>THE CONTAINER COMES CRASHING DOWN ON JACK E BREAKER!!!! ON TOP OF WHERE JACK STOOD STANDS OVERKILL, HE HAS A HUGE SMILE ON HIS BATTERED FACE AS HE LOOKS DOWN AT THE MANGLED WRECKAGE OF THE CONTAINER.</font>

Water streams down the cold man’s face and he turns around, he goes to walk away BUT A BOLT OF LIGHTENING STOPS HIM FROM WALKING ANY FURTHER AS IT STRIKES JUST WHERE HE WAS ABOUT TO TREAD! Overkill tries to take another step but AGAIN THE LIGHTENING HITS! Overkill turns around to see one of those diamond blades coming his way, Overkill reaches for his sword but he hasn’t got it! It lies halfway across the city in some rubble, Overkill tries to move out of the way but he’s not fast enough and the blade hits him in the leg! Overkill drops to one knee and as soon he hit’s the floor Jack appears in front of him!!! Overkill sighs to himself deep down and Jack smashes him in the face and disappears straight away, only to reappear behind Overkill punching the recoiling Overkill in the back of the head. Overkill’s face jolts forward BUT JACK MATERIALIZES IN FRONT OF Overkill AND WITH A SUPER SPEED KICK SMASHES OVERKILL IN THE FACE WITH CONSIDERABLE FORCE!!! THIS KICK SENDS OVERKILL SPIRALLING DOWN TO THE FLOOR OUTSIDE THE DOCKS!

<font color=blue>“You can’t win, you can’t kill me. I can win, I will kill you…”</font>

Overkill pulls himself up to his feet, He stands there defiant in the face of his neo-enemy, Overkill extends his palm telling Jack to bring it…
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WELL STOP MAKING CONFUSING POST TITLES!

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Overkill extends his palm, telling Jack to bring it and Jack flings his hair back then bursts into a sprint in Overkill’s direction. Overkill simply stands with his back straight and his feet together, waiting for the opportune moment to strike. As Jack gets in range, Overkill quickly steps back, gets his fists up to his face then pulls back and throws a punch, but Jack has again teleported and Overkill hits nothing but air. Overkill looks back up and quickly turns around to catch a fist then attempt to right front kick Jack in the stomach but Jack catches it with his free hand, then weaves his right foot behind Overkill’s left foot and pushes forwards, sending Overkill tripping to the ground. Jack backs away and watches as Overkill turns himself onto his stomach, lifts himself onto his hands and knees then onto his feet. The blade still stuck in his thigh, Overkill rips it out then throws it back at Jack but Jack just swipes it out the air with his right hand then places it inside his inner jacket pocket. Jack now stares at Overkill with the rage in his eyes burning through Overkill. You can tell from his serious facial expression that he’s had enough of playing games and wants to finish it right now.

Overkill however uses his wing to lift himself off his feet and flies full speed in Jack’s direction. Jack holds his hands behind his back, then stands to the side and watches as Overkill gets in range, then he ducks underneath Overkill and turns back around, charges at Overkill who drops back onto his feet, turns around and JACK SLIDE’S ON THE CONCRETE FLOOR, HIS FEET KICKING OUT BOTH OF OVERKILL’S ANKLES AND OVERKILL DROPS ONTO HIS KNEES. Jack backward rolls onto his feet, Overkill gets up onto his feet but is met by Jack who connects with a straight right, then a straight left to Overkill’s face that sends Overkill back a few steps. Jack moves back in and Overkill dodges a right fist and comes back with a swinging left fist that causes Jack to spit out saliva as he drops to one knee. Overkill grabs Jack by the head and thrusts his knee up at Jack’s face, but Jack grabs the leg, then gets back up and kicks the back of Overkill’s knee so hard that his enemy’s leg gives way and Overkill collapses onto the floor. Jack takes five steps back, then removes a blade from his pocket and holds the end with his thumb and forefinger. Overkill gets up onto his feet and can only stare at Jack with hatred in his eyes as Jack speaks these words…

Jack E Breaker: I, I am not playing anymore. It’s time Cold Man, it’s time.

But Overkill continues to stand defiant as Jack again stares into the Cold Mans eyes with those eyes that have started to change colour from a misty white into what looks to be a very light blue. He watches as Jack again disappears and Overkill can only do what he has been doing this whole battle, letting his senses and his reactions try to pinpoint and strike Jack before Jack strikes him. Overkill is a powerful being, but the winds begin to take their toll on The Fallen’s psyche as he allows them to carry him backwards, using his single, giant, black wing to keep himself upright as he does so. Jack still hasn’t shown himself yet, and Overkill is getting impatient. The winds quickly die down as quickly as they strengthened and Overkill drops down onto his feet then looks at his feet to see that his heels are hanging over the edge of the bay. Overkill lifts his foot, but as he tries to look down, he realises that he is hardly moving. <font size=4>REALISING THAT JACK IS CONTROLLING TIME, OVERKILL CAN ONLY LOOK BACK STRAIGHT AHEAD TO SEE JACK IN THE DISTANCE AND TEN OF JACK’S BLADES HEADING STRAIGHT TOWARDS HIM!. OVERKILL DOESN’T EVEN HAVE THE TIME TO BRACE HIMSELF AND OVERKILL SHUTS HIS EYES AS ALL OF THE BLADES IMBED THEMSELVES DEEP INTO OVERKILL’S COAT AND BODY!</font>

<font size=4>OVERKILL REOPENS HIS EYES TO SEE JACK SPRINTING AT HIM WITH HIS LAST BLADE IN HIS HAND, OVERKILL CAN ONLY WATCH AS JACK LEAPS UP INTO THE AIR AND THROW THE BLADE.</font> <font size=5> IT TRAVELS AT GREAT VELOCITY, SPINING IN THE AIR REPEATEDLY BEFORE IMBEDDING ITSELF STRAIGHT INTO OVERKILL’S FOREHEAD!</font> <font size=4> OVERKILL’S EYES ROLL BACK UP IN THEIR SOCKETS AS TIME IS RESTORED AND OVERKILL FALLS INTO THE VIOLENT SEA.</font>

Jack’s hair blows to the side as he stands in the wind with one foot behind the other and his fists up to his face. Jack isn’t sure if that final attack destroyed the Cold Man once and for all. Overkill had survived many devastating attacks on this day and Jack won’t take any chances as he stands, staring out to sea and waiting for that time when he will black out…
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I'll put it this way then...Beep!

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Jack stares out to sea, he stands on the edge of the docks overlooking to twenty or so foot plunge to the swirling waters below, he removes his sunglasses and even as water spills down his face from the skies above Jack doesn’t once mop his face or shake off the water he just watches the sea, almost waiting for Overkill to come back out of the waters, he knows inside that away from the arrogant exterior he prays Overkill is no more, he just wants it to be over…

<font color=blue>“Is it over?”</font>

Jack retorts something to himself he has wanted to hear ever since he met Overkill, he watches as the waves dies down and the once volatile waters are clear, the rain still streams down from the blackened skies above. Jack keeps his eyes locked at the sea, he can feel the temperature dropping and he looks to the skies, he places his sunglasses back on his face, and prepares himself as the water below begins to freeze over, Jack watches as small sheets of ice begin to form and drift around, he watches on…

<font size=4> A LARGE PIECE OF ICE SHAPED TO A POINT IS PROPELLED OUT OF THE WATER AT JACK E BREAKER, IT GOES RIGHT THROUGH HIS SHOULDER, AND BEFORE JACK HAS EVEN REALISED IT MANY MORE SHARDS OF ICE SPEARS ARE SHOT OUT OF THE WATER PUNCTURING JACK’S SKIN!!!!</FONT>

Jack drops to one knee with shards of ice impaled in his body, he looks over to where they came from to see something just below the surface, he watches as a feathery black wing emerges from the water, attached to the wing is none other than the cold man, Overkill, still very much alive. Overkill holds in his hand a giant ice spike, he holds it like a javelin and pulls back BEFORE LAUNCHING IT AT JACK E BREAKER’S HEAD!!! Jack disappears as the ice spike shatters into thousands of shards against a metal container behind where he knelt!!! Overkill senses Jack darting away so Overkill gives chase against his unseen enemy, it takes Overkill halfway across the cityscape but Overkill stops as something glinting catches his eye, Overkill may be level with the rooftops but from that great height he can still manage to see his katana embedded in the floor on the streets below, Overkill drops down to the floor below and picks his sword up. No sooner has Overkill regained his katana than Jack E Breaker has emerged a few metres away, Jack picks up a metal pole that lies on the ground, he throws it straight at Overkill’s back, Overkill is totally oblivious to this and Jack slows time down…

JACK ONCE AGAIN PRODUCES SEVERAL OF HIS THROWING BLADES, HE THROWS THEM THROUGH THE AIR AFTER THE POLE THEY ALL SLOW DOWN AS JACK WATCHES OVERKILL COMPLETELY UNAWARE THAT HE’S ABOUT TO MEET HIS DEMISE, THE POLE AND BLADES TRAVEL THROUGH THE AIR SO SLOWLY THEY APPEAR TO HAVE STOPPED. JACK LOOKS TO THE SKIES AS GIANT THUNDER CLOUDS GATHER ABOVE, JACK HOLDS HIS HANDS IN THE AIR AS A CRACK OF LIGHTENING IS SENT TOWARDS THE GROUND IN SLOWED TIME.

Jack then looks back to Overkill, who still hasn’t moved, Jack is about to shout at Overkill when OVERKILL TURNS AROUND!!! OVERKILL HAS BROKEN FREE OF THE DISTORTED TIME CAUSED BY JACK AND HE STANDS LOOKING AT JACK WITH A DEMONIC GRIN ON HIS DEATHLY FACE, JACK TRIES TO SPEED TO LIGHTENING AND THROWN OBJECTS UP BUT HE CAN’T!!!!! AS JACK’S EYES WIDEN BEHIND HIS GLASSES THE WHOLE CITY IS ENGULFED BY A MASSIVE WHITE SHINING LIGHT, JACK SHIELDS HIMSELF AS HE CAN HEAR OVERKILL’S VOICE…

“Now you’ve really done it…”

As the white light subsides Jack uncovers his eyes to see Overkill stood exactly in the same place, the black wing fully outstretched and the katana in hand, but now Overkill looks even more malevolent than before as out of Overkill’s other side spans an even larger white feathery wing, Overkill stands with his hands out by his side AS JACK CAN ONLY WATCH IN DISBELIEF!!!
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<font SIZE = 5>Overkill turns his back to Jack and that massive white wing FOLDS ITSELF AROUND OVERKILL AS TIME CATCHES BACK UP TO SPEED!!! THE POLE AND BLADES SMASH INTO THE WING AT THE SAME TIME THE LIGHTENING HITS OVERKILL!!! THE OBJECTS SIMPLY DROP TO THE FLOOR OFF THE WING AND OVERKILL’S WHITE WING STRETCHES OUT AS HE STANDS LOOKING AT JACK WITH THAT KATANA POINTED DIRECTLY AT JACK!!!!</font>

With the blink of an eye Overkill simply vanishes into thin air, and Jack suddenly realises that now he’s much, much more of a match than Jack could ever had dreaded, Jack looks around for Neo-Overkill to emerge but a white light consumes Jack and he finds himself stood in the middle of a desert!!!! Jack spins around to see a brief flash of Overkill mere feet away, Jack cannot react quick enough before Neo-Overkill is gone again. Overkill reappears behind Jack and smashes him in the back of the head with the handle of the katana sending Jack to his knees! Jack gets up looking to teleport away but before he can Overkill’s arm appears in front of him grabbing Jack’s hand, Jack tries to teleport away BUT HE CAN’T!!! The rest of Neo-Overkill appears and Jack swings a punch at Overkill ONLY FOR BOTH WHITE AND BLACK WINGS TO SMASH JACK IN THE SIDES OF THE HEAD!!! Overkill’s double wings beat and he is lifted off the floor with Jack dangling from his hand below… Overkill gets a few feet into the sky before letting go of Jack!!! JACK PLUMMETS TOWARDS THE FLOOR AND IS ABOUT TO SMASH FACE FIRST INTO THE SAND WHEN HE MANAGES TO TELEPORT HIMSELF AWAY!!!

Neo-Overkill can sense wherever Jack is and as Neo-Overkill closes his eyes, the sense becomes so strong he can even see a rough outline of Jack in the air and with one easy flick of the wrist the cold man smashes an unseen Jack in the face making Jack become visible and drop out of the sky onto the hot dry sand below!!! Overkill opens his eyes to see Jack E Breaker getting to his feet and looking up and the new-improved cold man, Jack raises and eyebrow and keeps his eyes locked onto Overkill as in the distance a whirling mass of sand is headed straight towards the two behemoths. Overkill looks at Jack with the mere thought of it lifts Jack up off the desert floor into the air to his own level, Overkill holds Jack in the air and looks at him and sneers…

“You’re right, time to end it…”

Jack seizes his opportunity, he somehow breaks free, he back flips off Overkill’s chest and manages to fire off a single blade, which Overkill, even whilst being pushed backwards, manages to fend off with his katana. Overkill watches as Jack lands on the sandy dunes below on his feet, Overkill is about to move in WHEN HE IS CAUGHT IN AN UPDRAFT!! OVERKILL TRIES TO GET OUT OF IT BUT HE IS SUCKED INTO THE SANDSTORM!!! Jack watches on as Overkill can be seen swirling around inside Jack’s sandstorm, Jack keeps watch but to his dismay the double winged fallen angel emerges out the Sandstorm walking along the floor, Overkill simply laughs at Jack as he edges closer to him…
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